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FAUX Chapter III

Jan is unknowingly used as bait by Reuger to lure Lacorse to the police station. But things go wrong very quickly.

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Ahnold20Ahnold20

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 26, 2009

the story is good

but i really like it if u have some voice in it



easimon1812easimon1812

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 26, 2009

not bad, not bad.

I like your style, and the art though it isnt perfect, it is consistent enough. but you are showing improvement over the previous 2 chapters.
Also the fact that you add movement for the action scenes is refreshing, a nice change of rhythm . if I want to read a comic I would read a comic, I dont think I would be able to keep going if all was motionless comic book like style.

PS:

thos echapters are not coming fast enough hurry up, or get more ppl to help you XD!!!


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BoltBrewBoltBrew

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 26, 2009

Great, just Great.

I love the story line, the artistry, and everything about it.
That said I wish to add my own opinion to the animation. Personally I thought that the choppy motions fitted better than the smoother ones, not that the smooth actions you have are not excellent and having mostly choppy with the occasional smooth would be intriguing.
Thanks for sharing your art and story, I cannot wait for the next installment.



LiliumLilium

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 26, 2009

Same issue brought up before

Although the story is still intriguing and your style is unique to what I usually see on Newgrounds, the choppy combination of animation and still comic was disconcerting. I particularly disliked the stiff running animation for Jan, which switched to sliding them across the screen, which seemed like something in a children's popup book (or that brought it to mind anyway).

I think you're still finding your niche in the medium and coming to find a style that you like for this animation series, so it's understandable. But hopefully the next episode will be a little less disjointed in the animation style, and will be longer with more plot to enjoy.


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cseidl1cseidl1

Rated 3 / 5 stars August 25, 2009

Difficult balance shows

It seems a difficult balance to strike between still comic and conventional moving animation; every example of it that I see on Newgrounds suffers from an inability to obtain such a balance. In some moments you rely on the stillness of the comic book, and others on the locomotive conventions of flash animation, and although this is the alternation I would recommend, the transitions between the two aspects seem rough. Also, the audio seems to lack in quality. I look forward to future, more polished episodes. 3/5


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