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[Progress] 1. Fish

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rated 1.76 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Experimental
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fish
progression

Credits & Info

Uploaded
Aug 22, 2009 | 9:22 AM EDT

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Author Comments

Hey everyone.

So this is my first submission to newgrounds, and I know it isn't that good. I just started experimenting with flash 2 days ago now, and I did this during recess at school yesterday. I wanted to put this on the internet so that I would be able to keep track of my progress, and if any of you are interested, you can do the same. I just hope my next one will be better.

To all you who've read this and watched this, thank you.

Have fun!

Reviews


SevlenSevlen

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

2 DAYS!!!

My god You have some potential In flash!! Amazing!!



BlueKoalaClockBlueKoalaClock

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Pretty good for a first flash.

I liked the general art/animation style but to me the bobber is too big or something compared to the fish. Also, though it had a good moral, I thought the movie was just a little too short. I also think the movie would've been better if the seagull noises were more subtle. Other than that, though, this is a pretty good movie, and it's nice to see a first flash that isn't something thrown together in twenty minutes with stick figures and no audio. Keep up the good work!


mrkenneh responds:

Aww.. now I feel kind of bad. "nice to see a first flash that isn't something thrown together in twenty minutes"...

But thank you for such a high score and kind review! I'll keep in mind the pointers you gave.


TheGrempTheGremp

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

It's a start.

Great progress for only using flash for a couple days. Just keep working at it.


mrkenneh responds:

I will. I just hope I don't lose focus on my school work hehe. Thank you.


GaiacarraGaiacarra

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Is it just me?

Or does the frame-rate drop to like 6 per second right after the fish bumps into that thing?

I like the sound effects. Use color next time.


mrkenneh responds:

I don't see that happening [frame rate drop].. or maybe it's just me. I might re-do this animation, making it longer and with all the input you guys gave me. Thank you for watching!