I Still Don't Get It
This fad of copying Egoraptor, I mean. He's one of the most unique artists on the site, and people pay tribute to this by... copying his work as closely as possible? That's sort of like celebrating pacifism with a killing spree.
I'm not trying to be spiteful here, this is serious critique.
One tip: Egoraptor is a voice actor, and his animation reflects this. When you say you've adapted your style from his, you ought to make sure the quality of the voice acting in your flash is at least four-star material. There are so many eager voice actors on NG awaiting a job from an animator, there's literally no reason to have mediocre acting in your flash. Call 'em up.
Once again, this is meant to be taken as constructive criticism. This is apparently your first flash on NG and I want to give you some advice. You (the collective, I guess, since there's three of you up there in the authors section) seem to be a good animator, and the writing isn't bad either. If you applied those skills to your own, original work... Well, you've seen how many valued original series and authors there are on this site; wouldn't you like to be among them?