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A cow and a duck do funny things.
MOOvie of the Year
Full of Laughs and Full of Quacks.
I've heard better jokes, I like your effort to make them alive however.
AT LEAST YOU DIDN'T MILK YOUR JOKES!
First off I want to say that there are a lot of things that need work...but the one thing I don't get is your drawing....I was checking out your other drawings and they were really good..but these seem sloppy and rushed..Maybe try using tools other than the brush tool..mess around the the pencil and pen tool. Also, use the type tool for text, it makes it look more professional and not done by a 9 year old.
I have to say that this movie clearly looks like it was done completely in MS Paint, which is not a good thing. Graphically, this movie is just not very appealing to the eyes at all. The animation itself was very minimal and not very impressive at all.
The jokes were mediocre, and I felt that they were definitely forced. Not to mention the sound was horrible. Several times the sound came across as very scratchy and actually hurt my ears. I can understand if you can't afford a good mic, but very simple mixing and even just proper mic placement can easily end in much better results.
It feels to me like you were focusing on purposely doing bad jokes, and that's the joke in itself, but the end product just didn't cut it for me. Keep working on it though.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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