Score: 8

"Hiperboy??!!"

by: creepyboy

date: August 19, 2009

It seems like a rip-off of Hyperboy. Try to be a little more original with the characters. The animation and the graphics are ok and it was fun to watch.
4/5

Score: 7

"Good job"

by: Kokujin72

date: August 19, 2009

I found this movie to be really entertaining. Docked you points b/c the animation needs work and they were no sound effects to go with the actions the characters did, but besides that, this was really fun to watch. The music was great and the action was entertaining. Also i see that your obviously a BIG fan of One Piece. When i saw Fandito do Luffy's arm pose and Gattling gun punch move, sanji's hand-stand spinning kick, and Usopp's slingshot, i was like "tightttt LOL" (u should have had him bust out 3 katanas and use Zolo's style). Anyways, great job, and keep improving.

Score: 7

"Good sloopy animation"

by: KingDavid

date: August 19, 2009

good poses, simple characters, nice attempt at fbf. Definitely underrated :( some pretty neat effects too

Score: 8

"cool i liked it"

by: Starogre

date: August 19, 2009

very cheery yet exciting animation! i like the scenes as a whole and the direction you went with each camera view/scene. some things i would work on are

color choice: a lot of the colors seem a bit bland and contrast the feel of the exciting mood of the flash

drawing: this will come with practice so as long as you try harder with each animation you'll be fine

backgrounds: some more detailed backgrounds could have been neat, even if you reuse them a lot. if they're detailed enough you could blur them a bit and it'd make the cartoony characters stand out a lot.

i'd say your main focus would be to work on color choice and which colors go together and just aesthetically please peoples' eyes when watching

good luck!

Score: 8

"nice"

by: Blackrat

date: August 19, 2009

Good job I really liked the sound track. It was refreshing to see a combat that did not involve another fast beat 2 bit trance mix. At this point I could go on about the style of animation but come on no one got great over night. I really liked this piece if for no other reason it shows you have potential,