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Aug 17, 2009 | 6:58 PM EDT

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Hey! It took Me a long time to submit another cartoon, But I did it! Oh and I'm really sorry about the file size, But I've gotten a lot of comments about My sounds quality, So I had to boost up the file size in order for the sounds to be less fuzzy. I know its not much, But I hope you enjoy it!

Reviews


Sid-bitSid-bit

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 25, 2009

Sweet!

This was hilarious! for not having the best graphics this was really funny! i hope to see more!



TheWalkinDudeTheWalkinDude

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 18, 2009

i give a 10

because it made me laugh and was really unpredictable. i dont care much for really great graphics or whatnot as much as if a cartoon can make me laugh(which this one did)..cant wait till part 2


Agentluke responds:

Thanks! you see thats what i was aiming for, just a funny thing for people to watch, The kind of thing blind people can laugh at if you get what i'm saying! :P


YakumaYakuma

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 17, 2009

Pretty funny actually

Was pretty funny at some parts. Just work alittle bit on some of your edges, and maybe make the subtitles alittle easier to read. Other than that, i Cant wait to see some of your next movies.


Agentluke responds:

thanks! well so far you gave me the highest score! and for that i thank you!


epelectricepelectric

Rated 3 / 5 stars August 17, 2009

Was alright

but you call that a scottish accent!?! I should post a voice acting thing in the audio portal



EvrasEvras

Rated 1 / 5 stars August 17, 2009

Practice make better!

Visuals: This was not very well drawn. It looked like you have just drawn a picture on paint, and then animated the mouths only.

Sound: The sound was actually pretty good, I could hear mostly everything the characters was saying.

Plot: I really did not get if it was supposed to have any plot, but guess it wasn't.

Humor: This was clearly a humoristic flash, but it was not very funny. By that I do not mean that your jokes wasn't funny; they where just out of porportion AKA not timed right. Making humoristic flashes is all about timing. Everything seemed to happen really slow. Example: In the start you could have done this: "Somewhere...at some time...two men was sitting in a car(immediatly followed by a shift of scenery)RIGHT HERE!!!!!!(then fast to the scenery of the men in the car)" Infact, if you speed this up, it may start look like a parody of egoraptors AWSOME series. I do take respect giving the viewers time to understand the jokes completely, but please don't give so much time that it will become boring.

Overall: I did not find this as a very good flash, but I see potential humor-vise, so please submit more and I'll be happy to watch it. Thought about giving this a 3, but because of the spelling-nazi I am, I have to take points for bad grammar in the subtitles.

Keep up the good work!


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Agentluke responds:

Hey thanks for the comment! yeah I try hard but I can't seem to muster up very good artwork and animation. I think I'll have to take some money out into buying a newer version of Flash, Because i'm pretty sure mine is out-dated, but for some reason it won't give a smooth tween. Well anyways, Thanks for the advice! I'll try to apply it to my future submissions!