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RECOMMEND THIS TO THE CLOCK DAY 09 COLLECTION.
Hey everyone! I know I'm late, but I actually just started working on this movie yesterday and finished it today. Hope you like, and I hope everyone liked Clock Day 09!
Great job on the storyline.
I appreciate your abiltiy to tell a story. Great job on touching a topic that I've never seen done before, Strawberry's family. The animation was really good, I especially liked when Strawberry was going up onto the roof, it looked extremely cool. Great choice fo music as well, it fit the piece perfectly. A little more background information on the car crash would have been nice, but it was still a highly enjoyable flash.
The fact that Strawberry didn't die when he fell of the roof outstandingly proves the message at the end, you cannot kill the Clock Crew. It was well in the spirit of Clock Day even if it was submitted a few days after the event. I'll be sure to recommend this to the Clock Day 2009 collection, I don't want this flash to go unnoticed. Keep up the great work!
You cannot kill the Clock Crew
The message never rang truer. Nice flash, mister.
I'm really digging the camera angles in this one but the story itself could have been made "longer." Given the time constraints though, totally understandable. My only suggestion concerns the part where SB is falling. I would have maybe included a slo-mo shot of him gliding/falling through the air.
Other'n that, fantastic!
Thanks! Couldn't have been the same without your music :D
Regarding what you said about a falling scene, I was gonna include one, but I then realized that I didn't have the time, and I didn't know how to implement a scene like that in an interesting, non cliche way. Plus, I think it looks kinda striking as it is now.
i liked the style, story and can't beat some fancy mike.
It was a bit short, rather boring, and the graphics certainly weren't up to par. Allbeit, I've seen worse. I gave it a 3.
thanks i guess.
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