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This Animation Took Me About 2 Days, My Boyfriend Help Me With The Voice Of The Man. This Is My First Animation, I Hope You Like It. Im Learning English... So... Please Be Patient..
ai la llevas
me gustaron tus dibujos y los cambios de escenas estan bien, lo que si te fallo gacho fueron las voces, no se entienden ni madres, puedes descargar el cool pro 2 para editarlas y que se escuchen mas, las rolillas q le pusiste estan padres tambien.
sigue echandole ganas!!!!!
Keep it up
It needs work but as other reviewers have said, this is better than most 'my first flash' animations you see around.
Try to get the voices up to a volume where they're more balanced with the sound scape.
Using a higher frame rate and including more drawings is something you'll get into as you improve. Practice makes perfect.
Thanks, Thats True, Im Gonna Work On It.
First off: You need to animate at a higher framerate with more frames for the actions. The walking in the beginning could even be tweened to make it look like he's actually walking. You can use shape tweens to fade the colors of the backgrounds.
Second: You need to adjust the audio. It was much too low. You can change the audio levels in the library.
Third: Use a preloader, and a replay button. You can actually download preloaders here on newgrounds in the downloads section.
I hope this helps improve your future animation.
Thanks TownFunk, Thanks For The Tip
very choppy nd hard to hear.
work on those, need i say more?
Its My First Animation!! Come On! Im Gonna Work On It.
I to am just learning flash, so i know what you are going through...but this could use some work
Is Hard To Be New On This. LoL. Thanks!
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