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Aug 16, 2009 | 5:43 AM EDT
  • Daily 4th Place August 17, 2009

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Author Comments

I've been teaching myself flash as I've been working on this piece so I know it's a bit rough around the edges especially in the sound department. There's so much I could go back and change but I'd just never end up submitting it for another 6 months so hopefully there's something to enjoy in it's current state cause I can't wait to move on to other flash projects that I've had in mind:)

Hope everything runs smoothly enough:) If not maybe it's best to bump it back down to medium quality. Enjoy...

Catch,
Scott

EDIT: Thanks Tom for the front page:)

Reviews


ArchMetaKnightArchMetaKnight

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice

Looks nice but jokes aren't really good. The credits joke convinced me give it a 8



TheNeviiTheNevii

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very good

Very good, creative, light-hearted flash. I like how you managed to hit quite a few good jokes (after-credits joke, sea turtle, etc.) while straying away from unnecessary vulgarity. Also, it's creative! You know, you really do deserve a higher ranking than what you're getting. Not to mention the art was very well done.


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cronobreaker responds:

Thanks, i'm glad you noticed it was light-hearted, people seem to feel I'm supposed to set the world on fire with jokes;P


HolyManeHolyMane

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

nice art

the art was cool ...colours and stuff, but the animations was kind of...it sucked, and the voice acting was also lame =\
and not really an awesome humor


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EclypsoEclypso

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good but had some flaws

First of all, the drawings were pretty good and the story is good. The voice acting is not bad neither.

Now onto the things you should work on : first, the animation is pretty much only tweens, which is not bad but it wasnt incredibly executed(Im thinking about the walk cycles and other stuff). Also, the sound is good at parts, but most of the time theres no ambient sound so it feels empty and long. Another thing is that the ending didnt feel like one. It just felt like you just decided to end it there. And maybe you could try spending a little bit more time working the dialogues.

So overall it's a good flash, the graphics are good, but the sound and story need some work. 6/10

....But you get one bonus point for the Grim Fandango music because of the nostalgia factor. :P


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ShayphisShayphis

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow

Your animations are flawless and the artwork is suburb. Awesome job dude.