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Aug 16, 2009 | 5:43 AM EDT
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I've been teaching myself flash as I've been working on this piece so I know it's a bit rough around the edges especially in the sound department. There's so much I could go back and change but I'd just never end up submitting it for another 6 months so hopefully there's something to enjoy in it's current state cause I can't wait to move on to other flash projects that I've had in mind:)

Hope everything runs smoothly enough:) If not maybe it's best to bump it back down to medium quality. Enjoy...

Catch,
Scott

EDIT: Thanks Tom for the front page:)

Reviews


pvt-blastopvt-blasto

Rated 2 / 5 stars

terrible

im sorry, but this needs a lot of work... the humor is really weak, the concept is cliche and the overall story, seems arbitrary.

you need to seriously fine tune your script and story before animating this, there is potential here, but its got a long way to go..

however the art style and voices arent too bad... the voices arent incredibly annoying, just the script is...

and too be honest, this isnt so much worse then your standard cartoon on tv, cosidering the standards now adays, so you never know...

but my standards a little higher, and i respectfully suggest you work on your script...

good luck.


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gthkenogthkeno

Rated 4 / 5 stars

next episode

i can wait till the next episode, maybe if you promised some voice actors like guitarmasterX7 from youtube or Dexterboy124 then it wouldn't be child apropeat but i'd be funny



MrPetteriMrPetteri

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great but the voices...

Great animation but you really need to get youself some voice actors, or try to train your own acting cause the voices were really...well boring, you know sounded like there was no effort put into them it was like somebody reading a paper. But if you put new better voice acting into this movie your score would be generally A LOT more higher!



quarkiemanquarkieman

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good animation

the animation was really good but the voices were lacking a bit other than that really good job! ha i liked at the end when he was like "you're nowhere near as cool as the robots from starwars" call me a geek but that made me laugh



GoofyGoober2GoofyGoober2

Rated 5 / 5 stars

lol= awesome

that was so funny and cool, icant wait for another one to come out, is there another cause this series is awesome