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Aug 16, 2009 | 5:43 AM EDT
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Author Comments

I've been teaching myself flash as I've been working on this piece so I know it's a bit rough around the edges especially in the sound department. There's so much I could go back and change but I'd just never end up submitting it for another 6 months so hopefully there's something to enjoy in it's current state cause I can't wait to move on to other flash projects that I've had in mind:)

Hope everything runs smoothly enough:) If not maybe it's best to bump it back down to medium quality. Enjoy...

Catch,
Scott

EDIT: Thanks Tom for the front page:)

Reviews


aniforceaniforce

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very good

graphics look amazing and colorful, but the animation could use quite some improvement... Sounds are a bit sharp too... Maybe do something about the voiceacting. Script could go a bit faster here and there.
But all together, very good!



Tagger54Tagger54

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great Artwork

This animation is great, but honestly if the artwork wasn't as stunning as is I would have skipped over it, the story is alright and can improve and DEFINITELY progress but it really needs some more FBF


cronobreaker responds:

Yeah I'm really happy with the visuals too, but I know what you mean, i'd like to get less tweens and some more FBF movement in my future projects.


MentalMylesMentalMyles

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I would like to see more of this

the artwork was good and the animation is aright. I felt that there could have been better dialogue as well as smoother animation. there was a bit too much of stretching and squashing which put me off. Overall, I would like to see this series last as long as the plot and animation gets better through time.



Dragoon36Dragoon36

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice, very nice.

Artwork is gold, theme is gold, while the voice acting is bronze. This is definitly a great piece of animation with a sound idea but the voice acting which is very important to any kind of entertainment is somewhat lacking, a little childish and slow but you may have had timing difficulities which we I don't know of. Whatever you decide to do, you can only do better. Good luck.


cronobreaker responds:

This was the first time I had ever put together any sort of story so it was a good learning experience to find out it's a lot more difficult than I first realised;P Thanks, glad you enjoyed it still!


LazyfeetLazyfeet

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wowee!

Gorgeous artwork indeed. Animation could do with improving but it still flowed quite nicely. Can't wait for episode 1! Haha.