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08-15-09 – 04-27-11

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Strawberry Clock finds the newest member of the CC!

Hey NewGrounds! This is my first submission. I made it in 2 hours for Clock Day! Enjoy! Reviews and ratings are welcome!

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sumidiotdudesumidiotdude

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Pretty clever.

This was really good for your first submission, I'm impressed. I thought the storyline was creative, and the funny thing is that there actually is a member of the Clock Crew named Grandfather Clock. Strawberry Clock still had some white from his border after you cut him out, it made his look pretty odd at some points. The audio quality was good and the punchline at the end was timed perfectly.

I suggest also adding a background to the flash since it had a kind of plain look to it. The ticking of the clock got repetitive too and it seemed annoying after the first few lines. I'm sure if your first flash was this good you already have room for improvement. Keep in touch, I'm looking forward to seeing future flashes from you. Keep up the great work and happy belated Clock Day!


FrenzyFrenzy

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Good for your first submission

Good graphics, although StrawberryClock looked a little grainy. For a first submission, however, this was excellent. The voice was of good quality, and I thought it was pretty funny. Add a replay button, though.

Happy Clock Day!

10/10
~ Z


onemanarmy675onemanarmy675

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Lol

funny animation for your firt flash
looks like you put alot of effort into it!

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