Score: 8
"A pleasure to watch."
date: August 16, 2009
I am very impressed by your talent at animating. I like the effect you used to really emphasize everything that was underwater. The ending was hilarious and creative, I did not expect that to be the outcome at all. It maybe could have used more dialogue at the beginning, but I did like how the mood went from serious to humorous. Good job on this, it was highly amusing.
I thought the plot was kind of unclear at the beginning. I don't know if that was intended for the turn of events near the end, but it was confusing at times for me. Don't get me wrong, I thought this submission was very impressive, it just needed some clarity, that's all. Anyway, I hope to see more work like this from you in the future. Keep up the great work.
August 17, 2009
Author's Response:
Thank you for this in depth review:)
I didn't have a lot of time to make this movie because I've been busy with lots of important stuff all summer, but looking at it now I must agree with you. I could have done more to make it clear that they are in a submarine, and I certainly would have done so if time had allowed it:)
That being said I'm glad you liked my Clock Day flashes. I shall try not to disappoint you with my future work.
