Dude, you guys got something here.....
Good job, guys. This flash has a really interesting precise, and it's also great because it actually has a story to it and it isnt just a random sprite fight. (there r way too many of those on this site). And the two main character look pretty badass. The sprite animation is pretty fluid, though it seems just a little bit laggy (that didnt stop me from enjoying this though) and the sounds go well with the actions (guess its pretty safe to say that u guys definitely know your way around sprite stuff). For the future, i would suggest making the text look more profession, like putting them in text boxes, giving each character their own pic and text color in text box (maybe even their own unique textbox), allowing the viewer to advance text with a button, maybe give the text a certain sound when viewer advances the text, and if you change your mind on Voice acting, then give each character a certain sound when they first appear in the scene and a certain sound to show their emotions. To tell you the truth, i really dont think u need Voice acting, but if u think u can pull it off....PLEASE, PLEASEEE have a quality mic and people with interesting voices (those things can really kill a flash if done half-assed). Also this should be a no brainer, but give this flash a kickass intro. To respond to your question in your comments, i suggest making this flash episodic and having each episode set in a different anime. One thing i want to add is when u make this flash, make sure that u.....A.) dont just make the format of the whole flash: they go somewhere, they beat up minions, they fight boss, and they win. Try to mix things up a bit, B.) try to give the main characters a challenge when they fight bosses (in this one, they kicked picollo's ass wayyyy to easily), C.) on top of giving them challenges, every now and then, put them in situations where it seems like they can't win and/or are about to lose and/or get killed. It makes things way more entertaining, and D.) Try to give your main characters some flaws, characters that are perfect get boring after awhile. (it also makes them more believe-able and deep).
Am sry that this is hella long, but i really see potential in this being really tight. If u guys want inspiration on making good sprite flashes, then check out, "Super Mario bros. Z", and the "TTA" series. They're fucking awesome. Anyways, good luck guys, and cant wait to see the first official episode. Thx for reading all my review and i hope u find my review helpful and non-douche-bag-ish lol. peace out
P.S. i would like to see another preview