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Tried to use the mouse again , didn't go well
truly unexpected but truly an awesome short vid, congrats
good with obvious flaws
thought it was good, but heres some major improovement pionts.
- FINISH YOUR SUBMISSION!!! (newgronds folk are harsh assholes, including me. if youre not done they tell you to fuck off, but im being nice right now so i wont say it.)
- spend QUALITY TIME on animation. (normally people spend a solid day or two on animation at the bare minimum, sometimes weeks. when you look at my stuff the shortest game i ever made took me 3 hours, it didn't get awsome ratings, but it was still decent.)
- make the ending on this EXTEMELY piontless, but funny (if he ate it the said "eww i fuckin HATE muffins, they taste like shit!!!" i may have LMAO'ed)
it was good, bottom line more effort. i'll give ya 3
that's awesome, I love it. 5/5
I agree with them
I liked it and it had me smiling but there needs to be a punchline. IF it isn't done then please finish it and resubmit it. Until then I can only give you a 2/5
it starts off well
Well it starts off well but then it just gets cut off. I think that you are still working on the submission or something but if you are then you shouldnt have submitted it into the flash portal in the first place.
i know dude
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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