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Tried to use the mouse again , didn't go well
good with obvious flaws
thought it was good, but heres some major improovement pionts.
- FINISH YOUR SUBMISSION!!! (newgronds folk are harsh assholes, including me. if youre not done they tell you to fuck off, but im being nice right now so i wont say it.)
- spend QUALITY TIME on animation. (normally people spend a solid day or two on animation at the bare minimum, sometimes weeks. when you look at my stuff the shortest game i ever made took me 3 hours, it didn't get awsome ratings, but it was still decent.)
- make the ending on this EXTEMELY piontless, but funny (if he ate it the said "eww i fuckin HATE muffins, they taste like shit!!!" i may have LMAO'ed)
it was good, bottom line more effort. i'll give ya 3
I agree with them
I liked it and it had me smiling but there needs to be a punchline. IF it isn't done then please finish it and resubmit it. Until then I can only give you a 2/5
here was no punchline dude. its felt like you were building up to something then...nothing. It has potential jst needs a punchline.
truly unexpected but truly an awesome short vid, congrats
I wasn't too impressed with the animation, but the script and delivery was pretty funny. This type of nonsensical humor is always great. I would've given you a much higher score, but the animation was suddenly cut-off. Was it supposed to be that way?
The Fine Bros have an announcement.
What happens when a certain Storm trooper got rescued....
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