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Aug 10, 2009 | 3:58 PM EDT

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Tried to use the mouse again , didn't go well



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good with obvious flaws

thought it was good, but heres some major improovement pionts.

- FINISH YOUR SUBMISSION!!! (newgronds folk are harsh assholes, including me. if youre not done they tell you to fuck off, but im being nice right now so i wont say it.)

- spend QUALITY TIME on animation. (normally people spend a solid day or two on animation at the bare minimum, sometimes weeks. when you look at my stuff the shortest game i ever made took me 3 hours, it didn't get awsome ratings, but it was still decent.)

- make the ending on this EXTEMELY piontless, but funny (if he ate it the said "eww i fuckin HATE muffins, they taste like shit!!!" i may have LMAO'ed)

it was good, bottom line more effort. i'll give ya 3


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I agree with them

I liked it and it had me smiling but there needs to be a punchline. IF it isn't done then please finish it and resubmit it. Until then I can only give you a 2/5


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars


here was no punchline dude. its felt like you were building up to something then...nothing. It has potential jst needs a punchline.

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LittleBigG responds:

thnx anyway


Rated 5 / 5 stars


truly unexpected but truly an awesome short vid, congrats

LittleBigG responds:

Thnx dude


Rated 2 / 5 stars


I wasn't too impressed with the animation, but the script and delivery was pretty funny. This type of nonsensical humor is always great. I would've given you a much higher score, but the animation was suddenly cut-off. Was it supposed to be that way?

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