That's A Stitch.

I don't normally laugh that loud.

Not during flash movies anyway. I found that to be absolutely awesome. I mean the animation didn't have a huge amount of actual motion, But it was still an awesome story. A simple short. As I said, I don't laugh hard often with flash movies, But this one definitely hit that spot.

'I'll just.. Die. Over there by the childrens toys.'

Awesome. I think you could use more depth within your animations though. Shorts are always good and funny to watch most of the time, But you have potential to really go one better with some small improvements. I think you should focus on.

- Altering your drawing style, mildly. The way your currently doing it makes it seem a bit sketchy. Maybe look into the idea of making your drawings more 'cartoon' style. And just mixing it up and seeing which looks best.

- Better stories.. Or even better, A series! I say this to a lot of people I review, for the simple fact that this is what gets most people off the ground. If your capable of starting a good series on Newgrounds, Your names going to spread!

- Another thing I say fairly often when writing reviews, Because this can be the decided between a daily trophy, or not. I think you should get yourself a voice actor. Your quality of Audio is currently a bit poor. A lot of good voice actors are around the site, And you should collaborate with them.

I hope you take this into account. Good luck with this all :)

Funny

It was funny and the clerk looked really agitated whenever the bum started to talk again. Good work.

Very good but...

I think the clerk could have been a little more enthusiastic... Maybe a really awkward facial expression, because you know that he has to feel like an ass... Maybe he is since he can't give a bum a damn macaroni meal lol... I still give this high scores because over all it was a very funny joke, and the bum really caught me off guard when he said I'll just go die in the kid's toy section lol... Keep up the good work!!!

Wow. Nice.

That was actually pretty good. I gave you a 5 because it was good, review rating of 8 only because it felt very minimal. The subtle movements were fine, but something about it could've been a little better. Perhaps more hand gestures or something? I dunno.

Loved the ending. Keep it up, man.

Really good...

The point and plot were great, and the ending was hilarious... The animation was a lil on the rough side but it didn't take from the overall feel and presentation of this piece. I hope you continue to make this series and i can't wait to see what else you come up with.