Good job

I didn't really get the ending but aside from that it was great. Just the audio quality was a little on the bad side

Neat-o

Ahaha, I actually found it pretty entertaining.
The animation is pretty good for your first coloured animation.
I appreciated the humor you used.

Get some friends to do voices next time though, to give it a little variety.

Good job.

Funny lines kid,haha,funny lines!!

I really likes the story,the way all were,hahaha i am dating you brother.I see that you are young,so i didnt expect any sponsored sites here so the work must be a begginer's and i will rate based that.

You draw good for the time being.I give a 6 for animation
Try to have a second voice in your flashes.Say to a friend to help out. Sound was sometimes crappy and i got tires to hear only you in every character.Use a voice mixer program to do instead.I give 3 for Voice

I liked the story.I give 7 for that.

Use better music and if you can,recording measures.I give 6 for music

Overall 5

Poor guy

This is what happens to fallen heroes

That was so horrible..

That it was good, I found it pretty funny. But you really should try to improve on your animation and voice overs.