Score: 7
"not bad"
date: August 9, 2009
nice improvement.
I liked the fish swimming around, but during the close up/meow part; if it bobbed a bit in the water, or even if just the fins moved it would've given it more life.
the cat was a bit stale on the close up, if you made a symbol out of the head and tweemed it to move a bit, or animated a few frames it would've given the cat a much greater visual appeal.
over all I like how the story got to the point, had nice anticipation, and was funny, although I'm not a fan of harsh language. Also the reaction of the cat was great.
also about the voice acting thing, if you want to ask people for help you can make a post to ask for voice talent, and then you're able to (once every two weeks) post on the front page, and you should get some resposes.