Not bad
This wasn't too bad of a flash short,the animation could had been better with the detail of the characters & layout but overall it was good for a cheap laugh seeing that goldfish scare the cat so it was pretty amusing,nice job.
Author Comments
Well here is my second animation, as promised its better than the first one.
As always, its mouse Drawn. IT'S SHORT! very short.
I hope you like Ficker... I think he is cool.
Enjoy
oh and I'm a very bad voice actor I know that.
FjChezz responds:
Thanks
not bad
nice improvement.
I liked the fish swimming around, but during the close up/meow part; if it bobbed a bit in the water, or even if just the fins moved it would've given it more life.
the cat was a bit stale on the close up, if you made a symbol out of the head and tweemed it to move a bit, or animated a few frames it would've given the cat a much greater visual appeal.
over all I like how the story got to the point, had nice anticipation, and was funny, although I'm not a fan of harsh language. Also the reaction of the cat was great.
also about the voice acting thing, if you want to ask people for help you can make a post to ask for voice talent, and then you're able to (once every two weeks) post on the front page, and you should get some resposes.
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maybe you ´re a bad voice actor, but your art is outstanding
one question why "ficker"
i´m sorry if my english is bad but i´m from germany
FjChezz responds:
I wanted a name close to fucker so ficker was close enough
hehe
it made me laugh ;)
did u know that ficker means Fucker in german xD
FjChezz responds:
Hahahah I didnt knew it meant that, but I wanted a name close to fucker XD
Well it was pretty funny
It was actually pretty funny. I think that maybe the animation could have been drawn better, mostly the cat and the fish, but that's it. I also think you should have made it a bit longer longer.
FjChezz responds:
Well I drew it with my mouse so I couldn't do my best but thanks :)