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Aug 6, 2009 | 11:37 PM EDT
  • Daily Feature August 7, 2009

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THIS IS PART 1 OF 3 SO PLEASE WATCH PARTS 2 AND 3 BEFORE COMMENTING! THE ENTIRE EPISODE WAS TOO BIG TO UPLOAD SO I HAD TO DIVIDE IT INTO 3 PARTS!

Thanks Tom and Newgrounds staff for front paging this, and thank you Newgrounds users for getting this the 'Daily Feature' trophy it means a fuck load. I'm so glad that the majority of people love this episode and find it hilarious I was nervous that people wouldn't like it as much as me and my buddies did. Some of you still complain about the animation/sound quality but I want to focus on becoming a comedy writer so please offer constructive criticism about the storyline and jokes, i dont want to be a fucking animator or sound guy when i grow up... if I ever grow up lol

Cheers guys! Have a good weekend, please get drunk with your friends and watch this!!!
-Pavel Lubanski

Reviews


swasticaswastica

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

It was ok :)

i love your work and im a fan. I know well enough that this is really hard to do alone. I gave you a 10 for being original. The animation is kinda like a trade mark. You dont see people complaining when they watch southpark on tv. I see a vid on newgrounds and i already know "it's pavel" and that, a lot of people dont understand.

If i want to watch a good video with plots and crap id rent or watch tv. I go to new grounds to see sick senseless crappy comedy. This is what i get from my man pavel.

downside.... The sound was really horrible. BUY A NEW MIC so i dont have to buy new speakers lol.

i love you man.... seriously in a non gay way.... like yeah.. no im not queer.... i love pavel... in a non gay way LOL


JunkYardAnimations responds:

LOL! 'buy a new mic so i dont have to buy new speakers' hahaha, IM NOT RICH!! :P


SPiNgoSPiNgo

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Just some criticisms

I'm only trying to offer constructive criticism and in no way am I trying to insult you or bash your series.
In the passed I wrote some reviews for these series which were less than nice.

If you want to be a comedy writer you need to practice more than just vulgarity. I felt you used it as a clutch through most of it, if not all of it. Don't get me wrong, you had a lot of things worth smiling at; mostly the beginning of the picture show but the obsenities and sex themes got boring quick.
You've got non-sequitor down.
The biggest problem is the plot. I couldn't find it. I know it's three parts long, but gar; I just can't do it, I can't sit through another. Is it just three kids day at school?
On the other hand:
The animation isn't professional, but the amount of work that went into it is obvious. The backgrounds weren't bad, not bad at all, and there's definately attention to detail. I'm mostly criticizing your humor.
I know your general response is "You need a sense of humor!!..." but I don't think thats it. It's just a lot of swearing with sex jokes.
But it's not all bad.


JunkYardAnimations responds:

thank you thank you i appreciate the constructive criticism BUT you need to watch all 3 parts because this is 1 episode, you cant judge an episode if you just watch the first third because theres no climax, storyline or action yet... it was too big to upload as 1 full episode and im really disappointed because people think that Part 1 is the episode but its not even close, please if u have the time watch the other 2 parts! Part 3 is rated 4.3/5 and has ALL great reviews :)


KILLA-LOTKILLA-LOT

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Respect

Watched all 3 parts, and I just want to say: I'm blown away. It was all totally unexpected and funny as hell! Great job and please keep up the good work!

xxx


JunkYardAnimations responds:

fuck right!!! thanks a lot buddy!!!


lostoslostos

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Not for those who lack a sense of humor

I simply love your flashes. Despite their lack of great art or animation, they are engulfed in such hilariously sick humor that makes up for the loss. All my friends love them too, they're often asking me: "Are there any new flashes by that Pavel guy in Newgrounds?"

I hope you can keep making more of these little masterpieces, and wish you become a renowned comedy writer.


JunkYardAnimations responds:

haha your friends actually ask u if ive made a new toon?? thats wicked, im glad u guys appreciate my twisted sense of humor, and hopefully one day ill get this cartoon on tv


theAWSUMBoatmantheAWSUMBoatman

Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice

ur really funny :D the guy below is just a dick sure its barely a lil choppy but its hard making a flash


JunkYardAnimations responds:

it runs smoothly for me, its a really big file tho so maybe its glitchy on some computers... but anyways thanks for the 10/10 dude i appreciate it!!