Score: 6
"Hmm"
date: August 6, 2009
The ending song was hilarious, but the animation I have to say was close to terrible. Disproportionate body parts (they over lapped in some instances and were over all really messy), the audio was head splitting and the voices, as one person I believe to have written, slurred and were off sync. Now, what I thought was funny was the scene where he's dropped into a random square bricked room (eh?) and was asked what happened, he responded "I've been used!" then the guy killed him with some weird halo shooty thing and proceeded to celebrate with nauseating scream. I'm sensitive so loud sounds and I have great speakers, so I know the scratching, screaming wasn't coming from my computer. The humor of this video has been overly done unfotunately, but over all, I believe your video has a lot of potential! Keep practicing your art and if I had any suggestions regarding software to bring your work together, I would be more than happy to tell you. Work on the audio, maybe bring your mouth away from the microphone a bit and work on the plot. I knew there was one, but it seemed ill put together...
Tootles :D
-CaddyCo-