Eh...
Wasn't terrible, but it wasn't good. Had potential to be decent if you would've added more humor into it. I did enjoy the faces on the trees and clouds and such, though. That was a nice touch.
Author Comments
Well,thats how I look every Sunday mornings.
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Please keep in mind that its my first flash.
Its a little choppy, my next flashes will be in 24 fps!
Also its mouse drawn and I didn't do a lot of fancy tweening in there.
Enjoy
Chezz
Ps: I can't stop the damn birds sounds
Its Short by the way
FjChezz responds:
Thanks,I will try make my next flashes longer and add more humour to them.
rough but it was kinda funny.
its had some humor i have to give you credit for that.
FjChezz responds:
I know its quite rough, I will hopefully make better animation eventually, but thanks for the review!
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FjChezz responds:
eum.... Thanks?
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this looks like practice more than an actual animation, it was really short.
anyways, the reason the sound continues is because you probably set it to event, or start, but if you were to set it to stream it would play only what it shows in the timeline. Event sound will play over themself if you play the animation passed the starting point of the sound in the animation, so those are the worst, the only reason to use event is if it is a really short sound. Start sound will continue playing, but they don't play duplicate noises over themselves like events do, so if you use start sounds it's usually fine
I liked the atmospheric noise after the animation was over, but really the quality was poor, most elements were static, But I think you can do better. You might consider looking at some of the tutorials here on newgrounds, especially since it's easier to get what I was saying a bout the sounds when you have pictures to guide you... if tutorials have pictures... I'll have to check on that.
FjChezz responds:
Hmm well I check and the birds sound is on stream I really dont know whats wrong.
The look on he's face!
Priceless. Short and sweet. You just sumed up every single persons sunday morning. Nice first flash by the way.
FjChezz responds:
Thank you!