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You know what? I know this is going to get blammed. So if you would, read the original story I wrote using the links in the flash. The story is alwayws better than my horrible flash attempts.
Needs music, matching graphics, and a more original storyline.
I can't use flash for crap unless it's something similar to a quiz or something in that subject.
This is going to be blammed, and I know it.
as a first its not bad, dont forget to add in the music even if this is a demo ;) and i agree with scyth118,, just put all the sentences together instead of breaking them down
didnt like the press the button thing
decent enough movie with a decent story
animation was awful
i couldnt stand the fact that i had 2 prss a button 2 view the next scene and the text was only in small blocks which was incrdibly irritatin 2 read
if im watchin a movie i want it 2 b free flowin,not stop start stop start
it felt mor like a game with very limited interactivity
go full screen, it helps... I'm working on the text engine, and I might add voices later if friends will agree to help me. Remember, this is only the first version- it always sucks.
Not bad for a demo!
I saw that it's only demo so I will just review it as one.
One major (easy) thing I think you could do to help the flow of the movie is not split the lines so much. Having the dot trails really doesn't help the reader, just put an extra line on the screen instead. See what sounds better when you read it out loud.
The lazy brown fox...
...jumps over the tree...
...and lands on the other side.
The lazy brown fox jumps over the tree and lands on the other side.
The pauses seem to bring the quality of the flash down.
thanks, I was thinking about that, and now I'm going to change it.
I just didn't want to have 3 lines of small text instead of 1 line of easy to read text, follow my drift?
I hope I just get that last bit better at animation and stuff like that. If you noticed, there's only like one sound in the entire thing. That was a test for using sounds on the frames and everything. I needed to use the start-stop thing because if I have sprite animations that are only 2 frames long, they go at supersonic speed on playback.
I'm still somewhat new to flash and stuff, plus the sprites I used is kindof limited.
After being exiled, the mysterious "Valdoros" must contend with home invaders
Tape One of a pixel animated Horror anthology series.
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