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Jul 28, 2009 | 1:07 PM EDT
  • Review Crew Pick July 28, 2009
  • Daily 3rd Place July 28, 2009

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Episode synopsis:
Jack refuses to give up in stopping doctor skinner, as dark forces draw closer to an end game.



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

really good i wanna see the 3 chapter


Rated 5 / 5 stars

This story is massive. This story is awesome. Both voice and character acting are awesome. You could totally write a wicked script. Good job.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

dude dude.... you need to stop with radnom flashes and get yourself into tv series or games. because if you had the write money to make a proper series or game I think I may be shitting bullets worse the silent hill. resident evil or any all old school games or series you have the talent to unnerve the best of men to little pussy's use it well.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

i`ma scared bra!


Rated 4 / 5 stars

It seems that they are working in a black market
They kill their family and then the youngest girl will be taken and ugh.....
Better not to continue the next part of my story

I had only a little detail of it so make part 3