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a quickly done animation about will telling you about a freind called graham he has who is a dinosaur. weird huh.
Can tell it's quickly done
I like dinosaurs as much as the next person did (when I was a kid at least) but this needed improvement. It seemed like you were trying to recall back to a time where we were more innocent and had fantasies like this. I think the coloring is meant to reflect the use of crayons. Of course, with all the cynicalness out there, it was hard to tell if this was a parody or not. My advice is to make the images and sound more clear and try to have more of a story. You should really not try to put an animation together quickly.
lactose intollerant lmfao
MY NAMES GRAHAM YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! lol
I like it...its funny 5/5 10/10
vocals muddled; animation absent
This feels more like a preliminary storyboard to me than something that was worked on hard and should have been submitted.
I'd love to see more actual animation--not just looped mouth movements-- as it is, the 'animation' was shoddy at best and absent at worst.
The vocals--which could have been a saving grace-- were instead nonsensical and frustrating to try to make out the words from.
I'd suggest taking this back under the hood, animating it more than just the bare minimum, and clearing up the words a little. :) Best of luck towards improving this!
yeah, i didnt want much effort to go in this peice cos i didnt think it would suit it
Didn't make any sense at all and the art style was wack.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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