Score: 9
"So seemingly random I couldn't help but laugh."
date: October 26, 2009
I couldn't stop laughing throughout this whole animation, it is truly a hidden gem. Even if you didn't come up with the plot of the story, it is still so entertaining that I applaud you for you creative efforts with the flash. Did you narrate it too? If so, you voice acting skills are excellent. The animation was disturbing in many ways, but the storyline needed some explaining, so I guess that animations were necessary.
Some color being added to the drawing would be beneficial to the flash in my opinion. I thought the music in the back made the flash even more funny, plus the narrator laughing at the story caused me to laugh too. I am disappointed at myself for laughing at something so crudely animated and tasteless, but your humor prevailed and you have my thanks. Keep up the excellent work.