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Jul 25, 2009 | 3:47 PM EDT

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"We find our two heroes, Marshall and Spencer, eagerly anticipating the arrival of an elevator. But they soon discover their wait may be indefinite, as the elevator is slow to reach them. The situation takes a turn towards insanity as other patrons start to gather around the elevator. "

Well, here it is. Part 1 of the cartoon I have been working on for quite a while. I would like everyone to keep in mind, that this was never meant to be split into a two part cartoon. But technical difficulties made submitting the cartoon in it's entirety impossible. So be sure to watch part 2 which I will be submitting shortly. I want to give a huge thanks to the two guys that helped tremendously with the writing and did the bulk of the voice acting. The addition of Don Claxton and Scott Eschete took a ton of pressure off of me, and I feel the end result was a much smoother script. Although we all feel there is much room for improvement, and this submission isn't without it's flaws, I feel it improves drastically over previous submissions. As I have come to expect from newgrounds.com, we are always looking for critiques to help us improve the quality of our submissions. Criticisms are always welcomed. Thank you for watching, and I hope you enjoy.

-Brandon Dowden
Frightened Children Productions

PS, I'd also like to thank Domiseg once again for helping me out with some of the music.

Reviews


TigerPimp666TigerPimp666

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 25, 2009

very good

lol i love this


thejuiceizloose responds:

Cool. I am glad you liked it.


BIGJACE1BIGJACE1

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 25, 2009

I chose to

save this coz i like it


thejuiceizloose responds:

Awesome. I am glad you dug it.


mikecarimikecari

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 25, 2009

Uh...wow

That had to be the most random flash submission ever in Newgrounds, I mean really, it starts out as a simple prostate exam, then fate does its part and has a guy with anger management issues, an 87 year old woman who wants to get herself laid, and a crappy piece of shit elevator that takes 20 hours to go through one floor. I mean really, what was the inspiration for it, it was so damn unique!


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thejuiceizloose responds:

The inspiration is that we desperately do not want to work our crappy jobs anymore, so we can do this for a living instead. Honestly though, the main motivation behind this is to take some mudane situation and take it to the extreme. That and not wanting to bar tend anymore.=)


ZelldoomZelldoom

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 25, 2009

Waldo is dead

Well at least I finally could found him.Good Job On Here.


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thejuiceizloose responds:

You know, people just wouldn't leave him alone. He just wanted to get away, but we kept hounding him. It eventually drove him mad!


theRASTAFeARIANtheRASTAFeARIAN

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 25, 2009

WE ARE FUCKIBNG HILARIOUS

brandon... i never thought we would finish this shit.... holy crap what a fucking ride....

to all our fans thank you very much for your kind words... and yes brandons animation skill is fuckin amazing....

FRIGHTENED CHILDREN PRODUCTIONS!!!!! WE ARE THE SHIT!!!