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Jul 25, 2009 | 3:47 PM EDT

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"We find our two heroes, Marshall and Spencer, eagerly anticipating the arrival of an elevator. But they soon discover their wait may be indefinite, as the elevator is slow to reach them. The situation takes a turn towards insanity as other patrons start to gather around the elevator. "

Well, here it is. Part 1 of the cartoon I have been working on for quite a while. I would like everyone to keep in mind, that this was never meant to be split into a two part cartoon. But technical difficulties made submitting the cartoon in it's entirety impossible. So be sure to watch part 2 which I will be submitting shortly. I want to give a huge thanks to the two guys that helped tremendously with the writing and did the bulk of the voice acting. The addition of Don Claxton and Scott Eschete took a ton of pressure off of me, and I feel the end result was a much smoother script. Although we all feel there is much room for improvement, and this submission isn't without it's flaws, I feel it improves drastically over previous submissions. As I have come to expect from newgrounds.com, we are always looking for critiques to help us improve the quality of our submissions. Criticisms are always welcomed. Thank you for watching, and I hope you enjoy.

-Brandon Dowden
Frightened Children Productions

PS, I'd also like to thank Domiseg once again for helping me out with some of the music.

Reviews


theRASTAFeARIANtheRASTAFeARIAN

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 25, 2009

WE ARE FUCKIBNG HILARIOUS

brandon... i never thought we would finish this shit.... holy crap what a fucking ride....

to all our fans thank you very much for your kind words... and yes brandons animation skill is fuckin amazing....

FRIGHTENED CHILDREN PRODUCTIONS!!!!! WE ARE THE SHIT!!!



Espada04Espada04

Rated 4 / 5 stars July 25, 2009

Good

I love the animation style, but what i love most is how original it is. You don't find much of that around anymore ^^. Keep up the good work


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thejuiceizloose responds:

I appreciate the comment. We should have some more coming out very soon.


UriahTWolfeUriahTWolfe

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 25, 2009

Excellent animation skillage

I can't say I liked the "story" all that much, I mean it had its funny moments. But dude, your animation skills are way up there. Random stuff like this is fun, can be entertaining, but you could do something really profound with skillage like yours if you wanted to. If you haven't already, that is - you may have, and this is just playin' in which case, it fits the bill. :-) But if you haven't, you should consider it. :-)


thejuiceizloose responds:

I am hoping there is still room for improvement. And no, I haven't officially done anything with this yet. I start school in the fall, and hopefully I can learn some things that will enable me to do this full time. But in the mean while, this is a passion that we have to do in our spare time, when we aren't working our day jobs. Thanks for the comment.


TigerPimp666TigerPimp666

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 25, 2009

very good

lol i love this


thejuiceizloose responds:

Cool. I am glad you liked it.


ZelldoomZelldoom

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 25, 2009

Waldo is dead

Well at least I finally could found him.Good Job On Here.


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thejuiceizloose responds:

You know, people just wouldn't leave him alone. He just wanted to get away, but we kept hounding him. It eventually drove him mad!