"We find our two heroes, Marshall and Spencer, eagerly anticipating the arrival of an elevator. But they soon discover their wait may be indefinite, as the elevator is slow to reach them. The situation takes a turn towards insanity as other patrons start to gather around the elevator. "
Well, here it is. Part 1 of the cartoon I have been working on for quite a while. I would like everyone to keep in mind, that this was never meant to be split into a two part cartoon. But technical difficulties made submitting the cartoon in it's entirety impossible. So be sure to watch part 2 which I will be submitting shortly. I want to give a huge thanks to the two guys that helped tremendously with the writing and did the bulk of the voice acting. The addition of Don Claxton and Scott Eschete took a ton of pressure off of me, and I feel the end result was a much smoother script. Although we all feel there is much room for improvement, and this submission isn't without it's flaws, I feel it improves drastically over previous submissions. As I have come to expect from newgrounds.com, we are always looking for critiques to help us improve the quality of our submissions. Criticisms are always welcomed. Thank you for watching, and I hope you enjoy.
-Brandon Dowden
Frightened Children Productions
PS, I'd also like to thank Domiseg once again for helping me out with some of the music.
