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TLTFT V.2 R3 1/2 Collab
This is the escape of a man called Jason from the nuclear plant he works in, which has its reactor damaged. He battles across his work mates and securty doors to get outside the nuclear wasteland that is the inside of the nuclear plant.
Animators: Tawnik, Endo-K, Stone, Drifts, Ace0fredspades
EDIT: Thank you guys for 2nd daily and 8th weekly, appreciate. =3
Now I know that if you make fights too Slow, then the whole thing can look dodgy and unprofessional.
But you guys had it going so fast that by the time you realise that the main character has turned around to fight the other guy, the other guy is already dead. Makes for good humor in a fight scene, sure, but it unfortunately leaves no time for us to feel any real tense moments.
Then, the generic comments others have said before me already, i.e: the ending came out of no where, there wasn't any build up, and it just left me sitting here, thinking "... huh..."
Don't get me wrong, the fights were pretty well done, and some of the little things (like "In Case Of HL3" etc.) cracked me up :P
Just... slow it down.
Not too much, gawd no. But enough that we can actually feel tense ourselves, as the fights go on. A little build-up at the end would just make it that much better too.
Keep up the good work, because it Is good otherwise.
It really helped if you take the time to puzzle together something of a corroborating story, i.e. as time goes on the radiation affects him, giving him the speed and strength we see. Without that justification it becomes a flimsy pretense for some cool run-and-gun fight scenes (which WERE pretty cool). The gun and radioactive pepsi/RAM bomb were also kinda sudden, just dropped in there. And the ending... just cut off out of nowhere. I was at least expecting the song to finish.
But, problems aside, it was certainly fun to watch.
you just can't have an ending like that or that quickly. serioulsly i thought that there could have been longer fights. could have been better with an epic run and ownage finish against a crazy mutant.
haha id recognize that limp anywhere
omgz leon howd you get in there!!? but only in the beginning. i dont remember him ever punching his fist through peoples heads. . . very stick-page-ish. next time give him leons hair X] rofl.
Started out slow, but when Diary of Jane kicked in it was badass as hell.
Good job mate.
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
GwainSaga - (Original Serie)
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