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Again, I have had flash for about a week. This is still experimental, but I do think it's kinda cute, and at least worth surviving Newgrounds.
Great idea with a lot of heart, but needs work...
I love the emotion here. Your problems are only technical. I don't mind the lack of a preloader, but you could have timed the music better and had a replay button at the end.
If I were you, I'd fix these problems and reupload this. I think it would resonate.
I thought it was a bit too short and I was missing a preloader too. Nevertheless I understand what you meant.
i like the message but i mean you coulda put more into it and at least made it not loop
I understand the message.
But it's not that good really.
It's short and there wasn't really much going on.
Doesn't deserve to get blammed though.
But for future reference use a preloader next time.
Thanks. I was trying to think of a way to get it to not loop.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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