look at this rewiew

please it was a good idea but you need to practice a lot, please people dont want to see first animattions, and i will tell you this didn been banned because people vote 5 to everything, I m not a expert but im improving look at my first animation and the last animation... please praactice before submithing someting new... i will gice a 1/5...

but is a very good idea but need a lot of training and please dont use motion tween, is a very abd idea onlu use for movements but when you used it in the begging it look horrible......

and PM me if you can when you do a new submission....

Kool

Nice Nice So You Decided To Put It Already
Not Bad Dezi
You Should Of Worked On It Some More

Not bad

It's realy good for a first flash.

This...

Wasn't entirely terrible. You seem to be getting the hang of it. And for a first flash, I'd say your doing well =]
I'd work on your art a little bit more and try adding some sounds to it. It was kinda dull.

For a first that's great

You really seem to have a hang on a bunch of little animation tricks to add to the realism, good job. I recommend you tidy up the graphics a little, sharper and smoother line work and such. Also, great music choice.