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I have spent heaps, and heaps of hours making this, the most love i have put into any animation to date i must say. I made this for my grade 11 FTV assessment. Lets see what newgroudns thinks of it.
I hope to get an A for it when i submit it to my teacher tomorrow :P
Display picture isn't present because Im using windows 7, and for some reason gay paint on windows 7 wont allow me to save gif's without transparency =/
well, happy watching!
EDIT: The assessment was if your wondering it is make an advert on some sort of environmental problem, then make a film. I chose roadside litter, and i chose to animate it :D
Littering never looked so damn cool!
I can be a mass murdered with just one bottle!
I like the topic of it all, littering never looked so dangerous!
It's fairly entertaining and gives you a lesson.
I like it :D
It made me laugh but probably not in a good way.
Well, I like the concept. Roadside littering is a personal vendetta of mine, so props for taking on such an oft-ignored subject.
Your choice of consequences was ... exceedingly dramatic. I mean, the glass lights the bird's BLOOD on fire. Really? Come on, now. If I could make a bird's blood spontaneously combust, I might litter just for the hell of it.
When your littering consequences aren't even remotely plausible, it really takes some credibility out of the piece.
Your car also changes colours; that's a huge inconsistency. The animation itself was choppy, but I don't know a lot about that so I'll leave that to more experienced animators to critique.
You also had incorrect grammar sprinkled throughout. If this is really for school, that's a huge no-no. I'd fix that. Get a proof reader.
Thanks for the help!
however i made it over dramatic just for the lulz,
It's okay, it'll get you an A
The animation is okay, sound is okay. It's weird though, when the bird dies you hear a gunshot. That's not the kind of sound you'll hear when a piece of glass falls out of somethings body. I think you'll get an A for it, it's good that because of one bottle multiple things happen (however a bit unlikely) but it's a good way to get the message across.
Keep it up.
eh not enough
it....kinda make's me want to litter...... sorry
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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