its my own mario sprite flash and its my second sprite animation IN FLASH. I made it for newgrounds and i may put it on youtube if i can, im lazy lol but its a good one i think!
What did I just see?
Because I have no idea. It's sprite animation so I can only judge that so much. But the story? It made about as much sense as a dog fucking a cat to me. Some voice acting of course would have earned a higher score from me. But seriously I can't rate this too high. Next time try sitting down and writing something then rereading it to make sure it isn't like a bad Monty Python episode.
Nice but. . .
well, the graphics could have been better. My only real advice si that you put the arrow to continue the story in one place the entire tice, to make less hassle for the person watching it. I thought the story was good though, nice try.
mmm...
The graphic is ridicolous, the story too -_-
not good
Well...
It was average. Good one.
It just shown bad grammar and its kind of choppy. The backgrounds just switched randomly so I can't tell what's happening.
Well, it's not bad. Please finish your episode 2. Looking forward for improvements on the next episode.
6/10
3/5
-AccuracyUP
Ehhh
the animation and the sound was good, i just didn't like the story.