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I know the movie is short AND it has more text than action but IF there is a part 2 it will have much more action. Promise that. Also you'll understand the storyline better in pt. 2 (if there is one)
Your fellow NG user,
Amazing. Too many people just make fight scenes. I always want people to work more comedy into the fighting
I've seen worse! At first I was concerned about the stationary bike with all the crazy lines, but it got better later on. Very action-packed; you have alot of animation potential, too. But there needs to be more acting among the stick-figures. And wheres the motivation to all of this?! Why was that bike guy chasing him? Why did the black stick bust in the building and beat up all those guys. Why did the reds attack him? Were they protecting something?
Well, you get where I'm going...
Better do some serious writing for Pt. 2, for your sake.
Hopefully you will understand the story better for part 2. Thanks for the review!
This is actally pretty funny, reminds me of Xiao Xiao (which is a good thing!)
Defintly should be put on the portal
Very smooth animation and sound effects. The only things I would change would be some of the text which is hard to see over the blue and maybe make it a bit longer.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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