okay..
You really, I mean REALLY need to work on the audio.
Either I can't hear it or it's garbled, or it's fuzzeh :P
BTW lemme guess: Your inspiration was Family Guy.
I'm sorry, but this just isn't funny.
YEAH MORE DETAILS IN THE JOUNRAL
okay..
You really, I mean REALLY need to work on the audio.
Either I can't hear it or it's garbled, or it's fuzzeh :P
BTW lemme guess: Your inspiration was Family Guy.
I'm sorry, but this just isn't funny.
blah!!!
|...wasnt realy funny...and do what the guy under me ses..|
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Hire a voice acter!
The voices are really bad.. I think this flash could be really funny, IF the voice acting was funny, clear to hear, and yeah... just much better
i lol'd
pretty good, the animation needs a tiny bit of work...unless it was intentional..
but other than that i found it pretty funny!
Nice Animation
You certainly know the tech part of making a flash video. However, to make a good cartoon the writing and voice acting need improvement. I'm not trying to be a dick. The animation was really good and the design was decent. The story was a little on the lengthy side. The voice acting was...well..not up to par. I understand you worked long and hard on this. The thing is, with a little help from your friends,(someone who can diversify their voice and someone who can write a good story) you could cut your time in half and also have a great show.