Well done

I thought your voice acting was pretty good, and for your first flash, this isn't half bad!

sweeet!

I just loved it

Well...

I respect that this is youre first flash and that flash takes a long time so i thought and im giving it a 10.

Well...

ill give you a 6 stars for animation,no real story more like a situation that most users can relate to (good job) because no one on ng likes original stuff with the exception of water lolies or w/e its called now.i would of given you more due to the simple fact that the animation was really good but the "art" killed it for me.just practice on your drawings a little more but dont overdo it because then you take away from other things that make this flash have great potential :D

Abrupt ending?

Preloader comment: don't put blue text on grey background. I thought it was my eyes, but no, if the text doesn't contrast with the background, it'll be absorbed. Can't read it...

Ok the plot is clear: you've even given a summary in the "Author comments".
The background music is either louder or as loud as the dialogue volume, so I don't really understand what they are saying. Either subtitles or louder voice volume would be better.

I must say that I find the shape of the characters quite funny. The facial expressions and the body language are very clear.

I find it a shame that you didn't complete the ending that well. It's very abrupt. I thought it was my browser that froze, but no it's the movie that ended. There were no credits or fade out, or a ending scene.

But keep up the good work.