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this is ablut 2 frends just hanging out
i would like yall to coment and review this and tellme what i should do for the next one
this is also my first flash animation that isnot somthin about stickmen
I thought your voice acting was pretty good, and for your first flash, this isn't half bad!
I just loved it
I respect that this is youre first flash and that flash takes a long time so i thought and im giving it a 10.
ill give you a 6 stars for animation,no real story more like a situation that most users can relate to (good job) because no one on ng likes original stuff with the exception of water lolies or w/e its called now.i would of given you more due to the simple fact that the animation was really good but the "art" killed it for me.just practice on your drawings a little more but dont overdo it because then you take away from other things that make this flash have great potential :D
i wanted to draw something simple and easy since i have no experience with drawing with a mouse plus i drew the 2 caricatures in 2nd grade and i really wanted to use them in some way
Preloader comment: don't put blue text on grey background. I thought it was my eyes, but no, if the text doesn't contrast with the background, it'll be absorbed. Can't read it...
Ok the plot is clear: you've even given a summary in the "Author comments".
The background music is either louder or as loud as the dialogue volume, so I don't really understand what they are saying. Either subtitles or louder voice volume would be better.
I must say that I find the shape of the characters quite funny. The facial expressions and the body language are very clear.
I find it a shame that you didn't complete the ending that well. It's very abrupt. I thought it was my browser that froze, but no it's the movie that ended. There were no credits or fade out, or a ending scene.
But keep up the good work.
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