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This trailer although it still shows scenes that will take place in the series, none of these animations will be used. I've revamped it to look "television quality" and plan on releasing it *hopefully* by the end of the year 2011!!
I'd have to agree with some of the others...
It does have a very Coraline feel to it...might just be bad timing is all as Coraline is about to be released on DVD...
As far as design and story go, I think it needs something we care about in it...Here you have this story, but stories that are boring or don't catch our attention won't be remembered. Try to choose something Over The Top / Extreme. Yeah he has to "save" something which I now don't even remember though I watched this trailer not more than 30 seconds ago...Go over the top like Save The World or Save Himself...something that we can relate to and care about.
As a director you have to tell the audience "exactly" what they are meant to understand, while you might understand it, try to view things from a viewers perspective.
Hope that was helpful.
Ryan A. Garcia
Thanks! THat is helpful, although we didn't want to give anything away in the trailer, trust me, it's a lot deeper than this 60 second bit you saw here. We've worked on this script for 3 years, it's over the top alright, but if you want to see what it is actually all about, you'll have to come back next month for the full-length episode. Sorry, but we just can't give away our killer plot right off the bat. We simply wanted to intrigue. And no, it has nothing to do with Caroline. Hope to see you back!
cool but unoriginal
Yeah, so the whole time all i could think of was Coraline, mostly cause they have the same exact concept, only this time its a grungy middle-aged man in a bear suit as opposed to a charming little girl. Yeah, I'm watching this. Btw, not to sound like some kinda pervert, but the 'G' in Corndog looks like a penis. maybe you wanna change that for the final version cause it really kills everything about it for me
Someone else mentioned that, *about the G looking like a penis* and we'll definitely change that. And please, we didn't give anything away in this trailer, trust me it is nothing like Caroline... Please come back and watch when the full-length is released next month *August* and see for yourself...
it looks like it wil be a good animation.
the trailer makes you want more.
Thanks! That's what we were going for, although some of our more recent viewers don't seem to get that. Glad you did though! Come back in August for the full-length episode!
I liked when the dick unravelled and hit him in the nose.
Well.. That wasn't a penis...
It looks like it could be good.
But the music was awful. Just awful. And the part at the end literally gave me a seizure.
Well sorry you didn't like the music and for the seizure you experienced! Come back for the full-length and we'll make it up to you and more!
A short film about a park bench
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