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Jul 16, 2009 | 5:08 PM EDT
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Author Comments

So I found this episode that I had worked on about a year and a half ago and never completed. I thought I'd finish it up and put it online just for the heck of it. Lately, I think my animations have been getting a little bit more complex with the gags and this episode just brings it back to good 'ole random play.

Let me know what you think...Personally, I like the ones I am working on now better, but that's just me!



Rated 2 / 5 stars

what the fuck!!!

cool funny but seriously there isnt enough pain soooo 4/10


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

funny but whats o never mind

well that was odd man to odd so not hat many stars k


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

No ending

Don't get me wrong, it was pretty good. But without an ending, I can't give it a good score. Sorry.


Rated 1 / 5 stars

yeah i agree with u!

i totally dun like this, cos its expected and boring. the ending is , erm, lame too.

i rather like the ones that u hav going on now, like pencilmation #1-7. they are SOOOOOO much better than this (:


Rated 1 / 5 stars

pacing is too slow

the pacing is way too slow

sound effects are a nice touch, but the pacing is way too slow and overly tedious. you ought look at stuff like Wile E Coyote or Elmer Fudd, which i think has a similar structure/premise to your cartoon (i.e. sight gags, mishaps involving props and other physical objects, lots of sound effects, and a story which revolves around the typical main character versus an elusive rival wherein the main character always gets hurt and the rival always survives with near god-like abilities)