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Jul 16, 2009 | 5:08 PM EDT
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Author Comments

So I found this episode that I had worked on about a year and a half ago and never completed. I thought I'd finish it up and put it online just for the heck of it. Lately, I think my animations have been getting a little bit more complex with the gags and this episode just brings it back to good 'ole random play.

Let me know what you think...Personally, I like the ones I am working on now better, but that's just me!

Reviews


WhoknowsmeaUdiOWhoknowsmeaUdiO

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Funny.

I think this short (never watched an episode before) really has some potential. But it's rather goofy and it feels like you're not planning on making it a tiny bit more serious.
The music was really silly and reminded me of Dora and the loop really started to annoy me after a certain period of time.

The background was really good though, but I don't think it'd be that fair to count that in my rating, although it shows you try to make the non-animated things as good as you can (including the pencil).

The overall animation was quite good, and it was funny. But the story was slowly dragging itself on, and after a few times of thinking "Could you just move
on?", the movie was ruined for me.

I believe I can see you enjoy animating these, and that's what counts.


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moleman1000moleman1000

Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice

pretty good made me laugh 5



toxtox

Rated 5 / 5 stars

hay question

i got a question for you and i hope to get a answer to it via private and public mail... was this all stop animation... frame by frame, if it was i would love to know your trick at getting the pencil to look like that. it was realy smooth.



ruralurbanruralurban

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I LOVE THESE THINGS!

Yeah!!!!1

Nice3 and looney toons funny



george-kelly-johnsongeorge-kelly-johnson

Rated 1 / 5 stars

pacing is too slow

the pacing is way too slow

sound effects are a nice touch, but the pacing is way too slow and overly tedious. you ought look at stuff like Wile E Coyote or Elmer Fudd, which i think has a similar structure/premise to your cartoon (i.e. sight gags, mishaps involving props and other physical objects, lots of sound effects, and a story which revolves around the typical main character versus an elusive rival wherein the main character always gets hurt and the rival always survives with near god-like abilities)