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Jul 15, 2009 | 5:56 PM EDT

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Basically, I have uploaded this video as a design and a pitch for a series I am contemplating making called Green Diamond Project, about the war on Robots, and these amazing machines piloted by souls that are humanities last hope. I am looking for opinions on the IDEA, not the flash. I am likely to be making this even if people think it is rubbish, so if you could tell me why it is rubbish so that I could change it, that would be appreciated. Or if you think it is cool, then say so!

If you fancy a peak at the teaser trailer, you can find it here:
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=wuHy4MNEm-s

TOODLES!
Jage

Thanks Guys!
Jage

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TheManEatingCarTheManEatingCar

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It sounds pretty cool but...

The idea sounds pretty cool, but you should probably invest in a better animator if you want anybody to take you seriously. No offense, but your guys look pretty... well... bad.
The story seems pretty well thought out, but there are a few minor details you might want to change (ie the specs of the diamond soldier suit) to keep the story from jumping the shark. Its kind of hard to take a story seriously when you have an android piloted by a captured soul shooting ice and fire out of his hands.
I'd even recommend changing the "captured soul" thing if it weren't a crucial part of the story. Like, if its a changeable detail, you might want to make it a mortally wounded soldier's soul or something.

All and all, it seems like a pretty solid idea, there are just a few details you might want to change to make it at least somewhat believable.
Good luck!


Jage1992 responds:

Thanks very much for the review. I shall change some of the perks, definately the shoes, and I shall make up the name for a super strong metal making them very hard to destroy or something. The hand actually kind of detaches and from the place where it used to be, a small cannon like thing will pop out with inter changeable modes, although I didn't really make this very clear!

Thanks for the review!
If you fancy a peak at the teaser trailer, you can find it here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wuHy4M NEm-s

TOODLES!
Jage


DrGigglesDrGiggles

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

not too bad

It looks like it might be a good idea, i\d be interested in seeing what you make out of it. Animation looks good


Jage1992 responds:

I'm glad you liked it!
Thanks for taking the time to review! I have started scripting and will begin slaving away over a hot keyboard soon!

Thanks for the review!
If you fancy a peak at the teaser trailer, you can find it here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wuHy4M NEm-s

TOODLES!
Jage


HerofaceHeroface

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Like a creepy BBC horror..

... but I think I like it... hmm

it's like metal gear, heat guy and dr. who rolled up in a neat article for the news at 10... definitely want to see this guy made into an animation... could do with a new/more detailed look though... PM me if you like, I'll knock something up o photoshop and you can trace each part into animatable flash keeping of course to your design..i wouldn't mention it but you said you wanted anime


Jage1992 responds:

I am glad you approve! It'd be interesting to see your design, I have sent you a pm, and if it is used, you would be credited up the wazoo!

Thanks for the review!
If you fancy a peak at the teaser trailer, you can find it here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wuHy4M NEm-s

TOODLES!
Jage