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a short i made
wow minus the ow
the ppl below me nailed it on the head... if ur gonna make a madnessanythinmg ur gonna have to make it exceptionally well becazuse there is sooooo many knock offs
uhh well that 1 dude who got killed was new (at least to me idk)
everything ppl said below me
heck make it longer that would be nice and slower
THINGS to fix
fix the cons
make it entertainin
im sorry but rite now im gonna call it a cheap knock off that has potential
P.S post me back about wat u think about my post
wow this helps
hey i remember you,werent you in a collab once? O:
good but i dont get it
Weird and short.
woah thx lol
That made no sense what-so-ever, it needs a background story to begin with, the beginning of the animation started out slow and a bunch of random crap just happened without any explanation, there's no date or place or time, and it was much too short, lots of room for improvement, keep trying.
welcome 10 hell LOL
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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