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I don't quite get the joke

I think it has to do with the parrots/birds being the turtle's parents, but never mind.

The drawings themselves were okay, but I can tell *someone* was being lazy with the animation. It was largely motion tween with a looping mouth for when the parrot talks.

The music was alright (at least it seemed fitting to me), the voice was clear, and the joke wasn't that great... So I suppose the only real piece of advice there is for me to offer is to put more time into making everything- less motion tween and looping, please =)

Oh god that terrible noise! :(

~ Animation/Graphics ~

Decent all around. The artwork wasn't anything amazing, but it's good and I always kind of liked your style. Simple, but yet effective all around.

~ Story/Content ~

The joke was kind of funny. Not like LOL funny, but more like a heh funny. Good for a short laugh, but nothing too great. Thank you so much for putting the little sign in the middle of the flash which then took us to the turtle being on top of the tree. I was really hoping that you weren't going to make us sit through the whole thing. :P

~ Audio ~

I finally get to hear sonofkirk's voice. :3 Let's see here.

Omg... what the... OMG.. I'm going to be sick. *Throws up*

What kind of foul beast did you allow to do the voice acting? I hope that wasn't sonofkirk because now I won't be able to talk to him without throwing up all over the place. :(

Ha, I actually had heard his voice before. :P I actually trained him so perhaps I should be added as a sponsor to this flash. ;)

On a more serious note now the voice acting was alright. Speak up though sonofkirk. Make your voice clear. Other than that not too bad. The sound of the turtle falling was odd though. I didn't like it so much and I think that could have been done better.

The music that you picked went well with the animation. I wouldn't mind seeing it turned down a little bit and having some sound of the waves or some wind blowing like you would expect to hear next to water like that.

~ Overall ~

A decent short flash. Nothing too great (especially that voice), but not bad at all. Keep up the good work.

~ Review Request Club ~

Got a laugh out of it

-Good-
The art and animation were pretty well done here. The music was a pretty good choice too. The voice acting was good and the ending made me laugh.

-Bad-
Not too much here, overall pretty well done.

-Overall-
A nice little movie, pretty funny.

~Review Request Club

Pretty good

Good job with this one man, really enjoyed watching it. The animation was good, very well done and well thought out, the colors were good as well, very bright and vibrant, really made the flash nice to look at.

The audio sounded good as well, Sonofkirk did a very good job with the voices, really sounded good.

Good job here man, 5/5 from me, keep up the good work! :)

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Nice

The drawings were simple, and the colors were bright and fine to look at.

The voice was adequate, knowing it's Sonofkirk's first flashes he's been acknowledged in, and was a good performance, though a bit short.

Overall, a nice and simple flash.

-Review Request Club-