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A Short Animation
(Before You Complain, yes, i know the drawings suck...)
Add some color.
The scene when the monster is walking through the city needs color, and lots of it and so does every scene after that, other than that, It was okay.
the drawings do suck, but it's still better than anything i could draw. but the premise was good, birds are such evil bastards!
it's pretty good. story needs an ending though, or some type of closure such as "to be continued".
as far as complaining goes there's two ways you can view it, you can look at complaining as an unfound negative, as most do (because they're negative themselves), or as (positive) constructive criticism.
put your ego aside for a moment, and look objectively onto your own work, and ask yourself what can be better? then i'd suggest looking at the top 10, and recognize what it that those are doing that are consistently getting high scores.
It was decent
It was really good until the giant ate that one guy and the music stopped. Then it just kinda died. If you made the ending better then it would have been a more decent video
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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