Score: 5

"decent"

by: useless1989

date: July 14, 2009

you need to make it a little smoother and also maybe have them move down the screen instead of in 1 spot well you know luigi has two more lives so we all expect a sequel

Score: 6

"You have potential I'll give you that"

by: Jesseblade74

date: July 13, 2009

For your first flash its ok. But you need to improve. On to the review!

The animation for Mario and Luigi is pretty good but if you used a few more sprites of their actions it would be fine. The goombas and the fire flower need sprites instead of ripped pictures. The star is good looking but again needs improvement. The background looks ok even if it is a ripped background from Brawl. Still looks shabby. If you used sound effects like Mario and Luigi fighting or the Goomba growing would add to the effect and enhance the presentation of this flash movie.

The action is below average at best. Even if there isn't much of it, the action proves to be insufficient to my entertainment, for it is too short and not very fluid.

Animation: 6.5/10

Action: 2/5

Final Score: 6/10

This flash is an ok first time flash and you do have potential. Just try harder next time and I'm sure your flashes can become successful.

Score: 4

"....."

by: Dvader213

date: July 13, 2009

im relly not a fan of the animation, music, or the plot. sorry :(

Score: 5

"Hmmm..."

by: Volk-Cole-Dragoona

date: July 13, 2009

If you had spit more time on this I think it would have been a lot better. My-self I see someone with good flash skills, but did not let them come out fully in this flash. But I still want to see you next flim. I know that it will be better than this.

Score: 6

"bad choises!"

by: DisturbedBoo

date: July 13, 2009

the animation wasn't that bad, but you could have used the sprites for goomba and the fire flower, also you could have added some effects or sound effects for us to know if the were hitting each other, if you're doing that sonic vs shadow I suggest putting at least some effects.