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Alott better than the last one which sucked unless you watched it on youtube.
Watch this on youtube for an opening scene.
I think that the only real improvement was that I could actually read the words. I think you'd be better off having all the speech at the bottom, like in Super Mario Bros. Z. If you haven't seen those, then you should. They might help you improve some. Also, it seemed like the music stopped during sound effects. But the music choice was pretty good.
ya i love super mario bros z, but i just got flash and im learning it so im trying a lot harder!!
could us a lot of improvement
your sprites are often of a really bad quality, try searching the sprite sites for better ones, also try to put more time in your backgrounds. don't be satisfied too quickly.
also it would be a great idea to look at the other sprite flashes on NG and study how the movements of the sprites, backgrounds, text etc. is used. just put more effort and time in it, and inform yourself maybe with some tutorials. then you'll do much better
why am i feeling like im watching a DBZ episode?
very DBZ like scenario...and combat scene...and plot...and lines...then end confirm your anime inspiration with a tentacle rape scene Oo
its power is over 9000? it cant be?!?!?!?!
The animation is scratchy and the story and humor are very dull. Personally didn't like it.
Great job with the sprites
Sprites look great. Wish there was more music or background noise of some kind. It might help keep the pace up a bit. Other than that, great job
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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