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It is a shame that people simply don't understand the humor that is in this movie. It is indeed quite funny in the way you animated slurpeeclock banning everyone. I thought it was quite funny with the contrast of the nonchalant humming in the background. Very funny, I liked it.

Close, but no cigar

It had the possibility to be funny but a few things were holding it back.
1) Animation. I suggest you practice more before your next submission
2) Voices. Personally they annoyed me as opposed to making me laugh. I'm sorry i really tried to enjoy them but hearing a kids voice curse just causes a gut reaction in me.
3) Jokes. The last bit was actually decent and is the main reason why I'm giving you a 3/10. I suggest looking at that last joke when wondering what to do to make a joke when making your next flash

WTH?

What is this unfunny poorly drawn no-point work?
Take an art class, and an animation class, and watch some comedy, then maybe post a video here.