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Jul 10, 2009 | 6:13 AM EDT
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Author Comments

Woah. I'm so glad it's finished :3
I really hope you enjoy it, I worked very hard on this one. I actually wrote a story this time!
And Ed did such a good job narrating this thing. I'm very happy :D

Runtime: almost 3 minutes.

PS: Since it's graphically pretty intensive, it's quality is already set to medium, but if it's still slow I advice you to put it on low quality.

PS2: Special thanks to Zak(TheBaldy), who linked me to the music :3 And thanks to Tom for the wacom! I love it so much c:

Reviews


DaylDayl

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I agree with Starving Stomach...

it could have used more actual frame by frame, but the art was excellent and de-emphasised the lack of animation. would have been hard to animate such detailed characters as well, unless you took a leaf out of johnny utahès book and simplified the characters during frame by frame sequences like in facebook 'n' twitter.

also would have enjoyed some personalized character voice acting, or even if the narrator made some odd squeeky voices along to some more precise lip syncing. just would have involved me in the experience more. nonetheless, it was a very good piece of work, and all my suggestions are just unnecessary, albiet helpful, improvements that COULD be made, if you so wished.

ps. i move my hands if im emphasizing something while i talk or explaining something or giving directions...:)


Rutger responds:

Hmhmhm, yeah, I might try that, thanks for the tip :3
We chose especially chose NOT to do personalized character voice acting, because we'd rather leave that to your imagination (:


papayabadgerpapayabadger

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

hahah nice job

XD i liked you characters, very creative! good choice for the voice actor too!


Rutger responds:

thanks! :3


StarvingStomachStarvingStomach

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good story, good timing, bad animation.

I give you a 7 because you had 2 out of 3 quailities for a nice piece of art. You need to spend more time on your character animation. Get some nice poses, and actually have the characters body move when they speak.


Rutger responds:

Do your arms move when you speak? q:
I think I get what you mean though, and you're right.
Thanks!


jinxworld70jinxworld70

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Yeah...

the same thing that happened to XxKumaxX happenned to me the first time too.

I reloaded the page and it was fine.

Prbably just a page load error.

In a totally unrelated note the movie was excellent, I can tell you worked hard on it.


Rutger responds:

hmhm, weird...
Thanks though!


XxKumaxXXxKumaxX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice... but there was a problem...

I don't know if this was just a glitch for me or ment to be... but only like... a 4th of the page loaded. The entired flash played however only a quarter of the screan was doing anything and the rest was white. So i'll rate this here on the interesting story and what i could see of the art and try back again later to watch the entire thing to give it it's 0 - 5 vote.


Rutger responds:

Oh... That's not supposed to happen, try refreshing the page maybe? I never heard of this error before.