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This is pretty much my first animation, so it's kinda rough at some points
also, its quite short. I originally intended it to be much longer, but oh well...
I MIGHT make a sequel... but only if I improve haha
A very good animation, your making some damn good vids. The one thing that makes me give u a 9 is that you made the ninja hit his bowl of rice which makes you think this will not be so serious, sort of like "you made my bowl dropped...YOU BASTARD!!! AHHHH, but then comes the intense action. A ninja would not taunt his target, they would go in stealthy and make the kill. but besides that little detail. OMG that was great!!!! hope you make a sequel
That was amazing
For a first flash that was really good, if you improve, then it would be even more amazing. you should definitly make another even if you don't improve.
epic type of fight and for a first animation it's very good
Wow, that was really good. I can't believe that was even your first try at a flash, usually most people's first tries are just crappy animations with lame humor that usually doesn't even make sense. The animation was very fluid, the music made it great, some pretty dynamic camera angles and movements that made it all come together quite nicely. And this also wasn't, "Hey, I'm a ninja who knows how to make eight billion of myself" "Oh yeah, well I'm a samurai who knows how to make sonic booms with my blade! We shall fight!"
The only things that I do have to say is that some of the actions seemed a little...just awkwardly drawn. Like hand placement when the samurai held his hand on the hilt of the sword. And just like everyone else said, the eyes, though the eyebrows were significant as well, eyes would help out greatly to help tell the story.
Some minor almost insignificant details, for the most part, when a sword was sheathed, it would be blade up, and on the right side. Also, when they hold their swords, if they were holding it two handed, their left would be all the way at the top, where as their left hand would be all the way at the bottom with their pinkie hooked of the end. Unless you wanna make him left handed which in that case, everything would be reversed.
As for the ninja, their swords are usually straight, not curved like a katana.
It would be nice to see some more weapons as well.
Again, this was an awesome flash, and it will be a pleasure to watch more in the future.
Heyia there ! =)
I can see a young talent here =) you are good to draw, and making animation is very hard and time comsuming. But you did well
thanks for the movie, next time you can make it more michinima ( more story like) but else good job =D
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