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Jul 9, 2009 | 3:19 PM EDT

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Author Comments

This is pretty much my first animation, so it's kinda rough at some points
also, its quite short. I originally intended it to be much longer, but oh well...
I MIGHT make a sequel... but only if I improve haha



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

pretty amazing

was fantastic...
the graphics and the motion was really nice, i liked the style, i just would like to have a little bit more 'gray colors', it was a little bit too plain
but the animation was really nice, and the story was well designed, i liked it a lot


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Improve? IMPROVE!?

How can you improve on this!?! The movements were smooth and well thought out! The unique drawing style of having no facial features (except eyebrows) was original! I say YES on a sequel! (There is always room for improvement, do not slack off and you will be a pro in no time)


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Pretty frickin awesome.

And to think this is a first animation. Its better than anything I can do.
I dont know what you mean by dodgy bits, I didnt see anything that stuck out too much.

It was a nice fluid animation and was pretty cool. Nice one.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

yeah sorta

it was alright but really really dodgey at some points, seems like you rushed some of it, just take your time next time


Rated 5 / 5 stars

well done, this is great

its hard to believe that this is your first animation. You have a lot of potential and i can't wait to see more movies from you in the future.
Keep up the good work!!!